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作者: chowyeah 時間: 2010-4-11 11:07 標題: Veido

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jbvw9vOd5YE&playnext_from=TL&videos=w2X5AkVFvoc&feature=rec-LGOUT-farside_rev-rn-3r-8-HM

what is sencond music?
有praty music name is?

作者: chowyeah 時間: 2010-4-11 11:08

1:26 music name is what?

作者: tom1314 時間: 2010-4-11 14:46

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原帖由 chowyeah 於 2010-4-11 11:07 發表
 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jbvw9vOd5YE&playnext_from=TL&videos=w2X5AkVFvoc&feature=rec-LGOUT-farside_rev-rn-3r-8-HM
what is sencond music?
有praty music name is?

hey dude,you should need more improve of your English language.....
and the song that's called:
don't stop make it pop - LadyGaGa

Chinglish....

[ 本帖最後由 tom1314 於 2010-4-11 15:10 編輯 ]

作者: penisface 時間: 2010-4-11 15:47

improveMENT

song that's ~ NO THAT

唔係LADY GAGA嫁, 係Ke$ha - Tik Tok

[ 本帖最後由 penisface 於 2010-4-11 15:49 編輯 ]

作者: tom1314 時間: 2010-4-11 18:57

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原帖由 penisface 於 2010-4-11 15:47 發表
improveMENT
song that's ~ NO THAT

唔係LADY GAGA嫁, 係Ke$ha - Tik Tok

你會唔會同人講
You need to improveMent your English?

係唔會!
ment用處不是You need to improvement your English Language

而是用於像....Self-Improvement(自我改善)....的地方..

不信?Let's Google IT!

搜尋:You need to improvement your English Language
[attach]71653[/attach]

我係Search唔到有一個係Improvement your English Language o既Result

搜尋:You need to improve your English Language

[attach]71654[/attach]

文法正確...

重有..
NO THAT係文法錯誤..

.

至於首歌,,我就唔知喇...

[ 本帖最後由 tom1314 於 2010-4-11 19:02 編輯 ]

作者: chunchung38 時間: 2010-4-11 19:13

improvement先岩..你自己睇下你3樓句野..係咪你打錯左唔知==more後面用V?仲有你個of字
improve係咁用,simply just : you should improve your english......................

[ 本帖最後由 chunchung38 於 2010-4-11 19:22 編輯 ]

作者: tom1314 時間: 2010-4-11 21:13

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原帖由 chunchung38 於 2010-4-11 19:13 發表
improvement先岩..你自己睇下你3樓句野..係咪你打錯左唔知==more後面用V?仲有你個of字
improve係咁用,simply just : you should improve your english......................

i don't think that
you have to improve your english language
is wrong..
improvement can be used in:
I cannot see any improvement in your writing.
-___________________
improve係咁用,simply just : you should improve your english......................

Re:咁我句同你有咩分別?

[ 本帖最後由 tom1314 於 2010-4-11 21:24 編輯 ]

作者: chunchung38 時間: 2010-4-11 21:38

你有個of 呀-.-同埋唔使搞埋d咩need more,好少見人should同need一齊用,more後面應該唔會係verb
or simply just : you need more("some" is better) improvement in your english
總之you should need more improve of your english有少少問題啦=.=

[ 本帖最後由 chunchung38 於 2010-4-11 21:48 編輯 ]

作者: legend124 時間: 2010-4-11 22:22

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原帖由 tom1314 於 2010-4-11 14:46 發表

hey dude,you should need more improve of your English language.....
and the song that's called:
don't stop make it pop - LadyGaGa

Chinglish....

4 mistakes

1. never use "language' after language like Cantonese,Italian,french,English
that's meaningless as the nature of both words are duplicated
make it simple,as we all know english is already an language, there's no need for us to define it again
2. need + noun/to infinitive,not a verb
you can write "you need more improvement...." , "you need to improve..."
3. we seldom use "should need"
better use "better need" or simply "you need improvement/should improve
4. "and the song that's called"
two subjects in one sentence...?
it should be "and the song is called" / "and for the song it's called"

you still need more efforts before being qualified to teach the others

[ 本帖最後由 legend124 於 2010-4-11 23:21 編輯 ]

作者: simonlck 時間: 2010-4-11 23:10

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原帖由 legend124 於 2010-4-11 22:22 發表

4 mistakes

1. never use "language' after language like Cantonese,Italian,french,English
that's meaningless as the nature of both words are duplicated
make it simple,as we all know english i ...

thanks so much. i often made the 3rd mistake you mentioned before.

[ 本帖最後由 simonlck 於 2010-4-11 23:12 編輯 ]

作者: victoryhihi1 時間: 2010-4-12 15:32

好野@@我地由L4D2區轉做ENGLISH區@@好開心XD

作者: penisface 時間: 2010-4-12 18:28

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原帖由 tom1314 於 2010-4-11 18:57 發表
你會唔會同人講
You need to improveMent your English?

係唔會!
ment用處不是You need to improvement your English Language

而是用於像....Self-Improvement(自我改善)....的地方..

不信?Let's Google IT!

...

should need more improve of your English language.....
need+ improve = verb x2

need to improve / need more improvement

No "That" <------ ok?

[ 本帖最後由 penisface 於 2010-4-12 18:31 編輯 ]

作者: penisface 時間: 2010-4-12 18:33

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原帖由 legend124 於 2010-4-11 22:22 發表

4 mistakes

1. never use "language' after language like Cantonese,Italian,french,English
that's meaningless as the nature of both words are duplicated
make it simple,as we all know english i ...

唔講唔識"and for the song it's called"

作者: derekyin 時間: 2010-4-12 19:41

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原帖由 legend124 於 2010-4-11 22:22 發表

4 mistakes

1. never use "language' after language like Cantonese,Italian,french,English
that's meaningless as the nature of both words are duplicated
make it simple,as we all know english i ...

有高人

作者: legend124 時間: 2010-4-14 13:30

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原帖由 derekyin 於 2010-4-12 19:41 發表

有高人

thank you

作者: 扯斷你枝旗 時間: 2010-4-14 13:47

好多英文

唔識睇

作者: joeka 時間: 2010-4-14 19:53

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原帖由 chowyeah 於 2010-4-11 11:07 發表
 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jbvw9vOd5YE&playnext_from=TL&videos=w2X5AkVFvoc&feature=rec-LGOUT-farside_rev-rn-3r-8-HM

what is sencond music?
有praty music name is?

0:32 ~ 0:45 是同你想要的音樂一樣!

Kesha - Tick Tock a.k.a. Dolla
[youtube]afzuvZBcIVY[/youtube]

Wake up in the morning feeling like P Diddy
(Hey, what up girl?)
Got my glasses on, I'm out the door
I'm gonna hit this city (Lets go)
Before I leave, brush my teeth with a bottle of Jack
Cause when I leave for the night, I ain't coming back
I'm talking - pedicure on our toes, toes
Trying on all our clothes, clothes
Boys blowing up our phones, phones
Drop-topping, playing our favorite cds
Pulling up to the parties
Trying to get a little bit tipsy

Don't stop, make it pop
DJ, blow my speakers up
Tonight, Imma fight
Till we see the sunlight
Tick tock, on the clock
But the party don't stop no
Woah-oh oh oh
Woah-oh oh oh [x2]

Ain't got a care in world, but got plenty of beer
Ain't got no money in my pocket, but I'm already here
And now the dudes are lining up cause they hear we got swagger
But we kick em to the curb unless they look like Mick Jagger
I'm talking about - everybody getting crunk, crunk
Boys trying to touch my junk, junk
Gonna smack him if he getting too drunk, drunk
Now, now - we goin till they kick us out, out
Or the police shut us down, down
Police shut us down, down
Po-po shut us -

Don't stop, make it pop
DJ, blow my speakers up
Tonight, Imma fight
Till we see the sunlight
Tick tock, on the clock
But the party don't stop no
Woah-oh oh oh
Woah-oh oh oh [x2]

DJ, you build me up
You break me down
My heart, it pounds
Yeah, you got me
With my hands up
You got me now
You got that sound
Yea, you got me

DJ, you build me up
You break me down
My heart, it pounds
Yeah, you got me
With my hands up
Put your hands up
Put your hands up
No, the party don't start til I walk in

Don't stop, make it pop
DJ, blow my speakers up
Tonight, Imma fight
Till we see the sunlight
Tick tock, on the clock
But the party don't stop no
Woah-oh oh oh
Woah-oh oh oh [x2]

[ 本帖最後由 joeka 於 2010-4-14 19:55 編輯 ]

作者: john2724 時間: 2010-4-20 23:30

tom1314唔覆既
legend124 講既野好似老師

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