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原帖由 InViSiBlE 於 22-11-2012 10:14 發表 
阿爾唔得閒造啦, Spiker 兄作左咁多個英雄一個都無出, 幾時到你同我
有幾個point ...
First of all, you have omitted 3 fundamental stats including STR, DEX and INT. Despite this, you have come up with 550 HP and 200 MP, which should be adjusted by an amount proportional to STR and INT. 550 HP is indeed too low. There is no sense that the hero will be killed with 2 moves (possibly, oda's second skill + electric shock).
首先，你漏左 3 大屬性，包括力量、敏捷及智慧。唔理咁樣，你就有550血量及200法力，咁即係應該調節力量及智慧的數值，550血量實在太少，咁係好唔合理的，隻英2野就會死。(或者，Oda的二技+電卷你就再見)
Second, I cannot understand the description of Skill W and E. Please Clarify
第二，我唔明W技同E技的說明，請寫清楚。
Third, what is the operation of skill R? You mention " [和英雄一樣打扮][持續10秒]". Does it mean you can control them? But soon after you said "上下後3個不同方向衝插目標傷害{100/200/300/400}" , which means you cannot control them and this would perform fixed amount of damage. The skill is too weak because it is targeted for single attack but deal only 400 damages, at maximum.
第三，R技的行動係點樣? 你話「
[和英雄一樣打扮][持續10秒] 」，咁係咪代表你可以控制佢地呢? 但係根住你就話「 上下後3個不同方向衝插目標傷害{100/200/300/400} 」，咁即係代表你唔可以控制佢地，並且咁係係做到固定傷害的。此技能太廢，因為佢係單體目標但最多只造成400傷害。
Last, Skill T is acceptable, but you should mention cast distance of the skill.
最後，T技可接受，但係你應該講解佢既施法距離
